“Yo babe! What’s this? It was in your old dresser”
“Oh that. It’s from the night some jerk drove through an oily, muddy puddle and sprayed me outside my prom.”
“You – may have mentioned this.”
“I had mud and road grit in my hair, down my cleavage. The dress was ruined. I saved it to recall my hatred and anger.
“But – years passed: college, first jobs, a war, an unplanned child and a marriage – all happened. That dress transformed from an icon of hatred into one of blessing when you, that same jerk, transformed into my husband.”
Inspired by Charli Mill’s Carrot Ranch, #99WordStories
and her Sept, 19, 2022, prompt:
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about; “Muddy Tires”

That’s a great short story Gary! And indeed made me smile! 😀
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Hi Diana.
Yea – I’m surprised at how these 99 word stories seem to work and, of course, I’m thrilled that you liked this one so now I too am smiling.
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Now, Gary, I think you need to write another story to tell us how this change in attitude came about – smile!
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Hahah Roberta.
When it comes to proms, I’m a chaos magnet it seems.
The one girl I asked to my own turned me down flat.
Somehow I managed to be asked to 7 others.
One father asked me to take his daughter and that turned into a whole story that – well, can I just offer you the story?
https://garyawilsonstories.wordpress.com/the-prom-date-adventure/
I’m scared to death of them now.
You tempt me to expand this story though. Hmm.
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I should have figured that he would end up being the same man. Great story!
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Yea – with only 99 words we can’t insert many players into the story line.
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NO you are right about that. It takes a lot of word play to get your story out in 99 words for sure.
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You gave a couple of my stories a read today Tessa. Thanks for that Tessa. 🙂
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You are welcome!
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Hahaha, too funny. Totally something I could see in mine and my husband’s playbook of life. Thanks for the smile, Gary.
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Haha…loved this one!!! Thanks Gary!
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Hahahah Kirstin.
Why am I not surprised that you would love this micro-story. The transformation of this guy had to be quite a stretch and I bet any story that explored that would be compelling. I’m so glad you both read and enjoyed it.
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Aww, cute. Loved the little twist at the end, Gary. Great entry. KL ❤
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Hi KL.
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I thought the image of a gal whose prom was ruined like this then ending up married to him was a huge transformation.
Perhaps you mean how it was snuck in with the last few words 😃
Thank for giving it a read 📚
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Yeah I hadn’t realised it was her husband she was talking to until the last line. 🙂
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I do like a nice surprise ending.
Thanks KL
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