That Blue Dress :: CR99 220215

Outside their classroom, Douglas was afraid to face Kari.

She had been stunning in her new blue dress and their first formal date went so well — until the disaster.

Facing each other with raised crystal — everything was perfect. He could still taste the rich meal — so wonderful. They synchronized setting down their dessert spoons and leaned back to take deeply-satisfied final breaths. But hers was too much for the zipper. It failed at that moment — explosively.

She arrived and faced him.

“Douglas.  Never — mention last night or that dress again. I’ve reduced it to ashes.”

 

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Inspired by a true event and Charli Mill’s Carrot Ranch, #99WordStories
In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a zipper.

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27 thoughts on “That Blue Dress :: CR99 220215

    1. Hi Diana. In the real version of this fictional event, I was not told how the dress was dealt with, but I don’t think I ever saw it again.
      How did we ever survive our teenaged years?

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    1. Hi Geoff. Oh yea! When they work – they are wonderful. But when they fail chaos often follows. Let’s just file this under the heading of “unintended consequences” as opposed to under “emerging technologies”.

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    1. Hi Hugh. Thanks for giving it a read. This story was fictional of course, but part of the inspiration for it came from a real event after which I’m pretty sure there was some information leakage. Distress happened as did some laughter. Sometimes there are few as irredeemable as teenagers. . . It could not be helped. It was funny.

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    1. Well I can tell you that the young lady I was dating who inspired this story some 50+ years ago grew up to be a wonderful person – but still does NOT want to recall the disaster.
      I confess that it does still makes me laugh which is why I couldn’t even think of an alternate take on this prompt.
      Fun stuff Charli – many thanks.

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  1. Exploding zippers (I’ve heard them) and screaming buttons (another experienced sound and visual) make great fodder for a story. Thanks a bunch.

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    1. Hi Antoinette.
      Ha – exploding zippers and screaming buttons do instantly paint quite a mental image – sounds from written words – remarkable is it not?
      Thanks for giving it a read.
      😉

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    1. Ha
      When Charli posted this prompt – I was stuck. I couldn’t think of anything other than what one zipper did to my date after our very nice first nice dinner. It changed everything. 👀

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    1. Hi D.
      This is a fictional account of an event that actually happened to a neat gal I was dating. It wasn’t as bad for her as depicted in the story, but she was none-too happy about the whole thing and I don’t recall ever seeing her in that dress again.

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    1. Hi Sam,
      Yea – the real life version of this fictional event was definitely a Yikes scale event. It caught us both by surprise and I was so young and unprepared for such a thing. Chivalry slammed into teenage hormones and havoc resulted.

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    1. Hahaha.
      Michael, you know we were supposed to grow out of such thoughts, but I’ll confess to having been split minded at the time.
      Thanks for sharing a laugh with me.

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  2. Love this. It’s similar to my story, where the zip burst on my new jeans because they were too tight. I ended up butchering them. So I know exactly how this poor girl felt Gary!

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    1. Hi Gloria.
      Thanks for giving my story a read.
      and oooo, sorry to hear about those jeans.
      I hope your, um, exposure wasn’t as bad and depicted in my story.
      The real event this story came from was not as bad as my story, but I don’t recall ever seeing her in that dress ever again.

      So glad you stopped by. 😉

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    1. Hi Irene –
      HAHAHA – oooh yes.
      She was terribly embarrassed. The real version of this fictional story was not as bad. I felt sorry for her, but was unable to help of course.
      Thanks for giving it a read Irene. It’s always a treat to have you stop by.

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